11/10/2015
WRITING TASK 2 ESSAY: TECHNOLOGY [1]
Over-reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn, or are forgetting, many basic skills. People are becoming so reliant on modern technology that they are no longer able to do some things without it.
To what extent is this true?
There are many versions of answer to this topic, and this is a very good sample taken from complete IELTS.
Model essay:
Modern technology has become an integral part of our everyday lives, and has brought huge benefits. In many cases it has made certain tasks much easier. However, technology designed to simplify things can have a detrimental effect. One of the biggest drawbacks is that people have become so dependent on it that they are not acquiring some basic life skills.
Take satellite navigation systems for example. Although they are an invaluable resource for people such as taxi and lorry drivers, many people are no longer learning how to read a map. Some have become so reliant on their satellite navigation that they are even failing to observe their surroundings while driving, often with disastrous consequences. Meanwhile, other features, such as automatic parking devices, mean that some drivers are not learning, or are forgetting, how to drive properly.
This sort of criticism is not confined to vehicles. I believe that reliance on spelling and grammar checking facilities in word processing programs mean that people are no longer concerned about acquiring good writing skills. Meanwhile, language translation apps on smartphones have reduced the need to learn languages, and the increasing use of social network websites to communicate is preventing people from learning the conversation skill.
On the other hand, the benefits of modern technology more than compensate for the skills we have lost. Modern in-vehicle devices have been shown to help prevent traffic congestion and cut down on accidents. Computer spelling checks and language translation apps make communication clearer and less ambiguous, while social networks help us to stay in touch with people more easily. It could even be argued that learning how to use new technology means we are learning new skills to replace the ones we have lost.
In conclusion, there are many positive things we can say about modern technology. Having said that, however, we need to be careful that we do not become over-reliant on it. We need to treat modern technology as aid, rather than a substitute, for the skills that we have learnt.