30/10/2024
[Bài mẫu Writing Task 2]
Task 2: Climate change could have a negative effect on business. Others think it could create more opportunities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
🎃Phân tích đề bài
Dạng bài: Discussion
Gợi ý dàn bài chi tiết
Introduction: nêu vấn đề (ảnh hưởng của climate change lên business) + nêu ngắn gọn ý kiến cá nhân (mặc dù climate change có ảnh hưởng tiêu cực lên business, nó vẫn tạo ra nhiều cơ hội cho doanh nghiệp)
Body 1: ảnh hưởng tiêu cực của climate change đối với business
Thời tiết thay đổi (bão lũ, thiên tai) để lại hậu quả khó khắc phục cho doanh nghiệp
Ví dụ: máy móc, nhà kho, cơ sở vật chất bị ngập nước => làm ảnh hưởng nghiêm trọng quá trình sản xuất + gây tổn thất lớn cho cả công ty bảo hiểm
Nhiệt độ tăng lên làm giảm doanh thu cho các mặt hàng mùa đông (ví dụ: máy sưởi, quần áo mùa đông, trang bị trượt tuyết)
Body 2: climate change mang đến cơ hội cho doanh nghiệp xanh
Cộng đồng quan tâm đến môi trường bền vững => doanh nghiệp xanh sẽ có lợi thế về niềm tin tiêu dùng và thị phần
Ví dụ: công ty Orion Vietnam giảm thiểu mực in trên bao bì
Các ngành khác (may mặc, thực phẩm, ô tô, logistics) cũng có thể chuyển sang mô hình xanh để tăng doanh thu
Conclusion: nêu lại ngắn gọn ảnh hưởng tiêu cực của climate change, nhấn mạnh tầm quan trọng của các cơ hội mở ra bởi climate change cho doanh nghiệp
🎃2. Bài mẫu
Opinions are divergent on the impacts of climate change on the business world. While some people believe that climate change will cause businesses to suffer, I believe that it will create a plethora of ideal opportunities.
There is little doubt that climate change has had a significant impact on business operations. Weather patterns are experiencing striking changes throughout the world, with more severe storms and other natural catastrophes leaving nearly irreversible consequences for businesses. Waterlogged machinery, furniture, inventory, and other industrial properties can be considered pertinent examples, the breakdown of which not only disrupts the normally smooth operational activities of a firm but also spreads well beyond the obvious losses to third parties such as insurance agencies. Furthermore, rising temperatures may cause a decrease in demand for cold-weather products such as electric heaters, knitwear, and ski gear, resulting in a fall in sales revenue.
Nevertheless, I firmly hold the view that climate change opens new profitable opportunities for eco-friendly firms as well as encourages existing ones to make a greener switch. As the public has become increasingly aware of environmental protection and sustainability, entrepreneurs who follow transparent green initiatives will hold a clear advantage in terms of market share and consumer trust. For instance, Orion Vietnam, a well-known confectionery manufacturer, has replaced its previous colorfully printed packaging with a more minimally printed material, which makes its products to a great extent appealing to a wider range of customers, especially environmentally conscious ones. Other industries such as garment, food processing, automobile manufacture or logistics can be inspired to regard environmental protection as an impetus for growth rather than a stumbling block to profit maximization.
In conclusion, despite the adverse economic influences brought by climate change to myriad industries, my perspective is that sustainability is key and opportunities are open to those who are keen to follow a green business model.
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