14/05/2019
今天要和大家談談 ,指考英文作文架構 (內附議論文超實用句子大全 )在底下有索取辦法唷:)
指考作文目前有兩種考點
第一種純議論 像是107年這樣 都需要你提供理由以及原因
第二種是議論兼像是 106年 請敘述自己寂寞經驗/104年 教導別人
的經驗以及過程
第一種是我們今天主要探討的內容
第二種只是在第一種的前提下 加上學測敘述文的延伸而已
作文論說文架構
第一 先說自己的立場
第二 在進而闡述自己的理由 加上具體例子佐證
第三 最後再回扣 作結論 (非必要)
以107指考英文作文題目
如果你就讀的學校預計辦理一項社區活動,而目前師生初步討論出三個方案:
(一)提供社 區老人服務(如送餐、清掃、陪伴等);
(二)舉辦特色市集(如農產、文創、二手商品等);
(三)舉辦藝文活動(如展出、表演、比賽等)。
這三個方案,你會選擇哪一個?文長至少 120 個單詞。文分兩段,
第一段說明你的選擇及原因,
第二段敘述你認為應該要有哪些活動內容,並說明設計理由。
以107年佳作為例
If my school were to organize a community event, I would choose the first proposal and provide my community with services for the elderly. 直接點明立場
My reasons for this choice are both subjective and objective. Firstly, my grandma is 88 years old and has been diagnosed with dementia. Even though my family consists of two parents and two kids who take turns caring for her, it is still exhausting for all of us. Because of my personal experiences, I know how many families are in desperate need of someone to
share their burden.
藉由自身經驗來佐證 即使輪流照顧還是很累,所以讀者可以理解或是被說服 提供老人服務是很好的
Secondly, long-term elderly care has been an increasingly important topic in recent years. My mom is a professer who specializes in this area,
and has even participated in developing policies regarding this issue. She has often spoke of how we are lacking in personnel willingly to go into
the homes of the elderly to care for them.
Thus I believe that the first proposal will be of great benefit to my community
第二,從客觀立場去議論,因為長期缺人而導致老人無法得到適當的照顧
因此最後下了結論說 她認為這提議可以幫助社會
再來這是第二段
I believe that the services for the elderly should include three parts: food, exercise and social interaction. 一樣點明題目 Most care takers have jobs
their own and can’t hire professional help. Thus the elderly have no one the care for them during the day. We would go to the families in need and provide the elderly with healthy meals. Then, if the elder is able,
take them out for a walk. Lastly, we will be sure to engage them in conversation to keep them company.
先說food後面提到 healthy food
Exercise > take them for a walk
Social interaction > keep them company, engage in conversation
每一個帶出的主題都帶有例子 相當具有說服力
With these services, I’m sure that not only the lives
of the elderly will improve, but also the atmosphere of the community as a whole.
重申自己立場以及對未來做出結論預測_社區將會更好
通常 閱卷老師的對佳作的評論不外乎是 結構清楚/敘事流暢 大家可以多參考範文的架構分析,敘事內容
Wes點評:大家可以發現他的一些用詞很具體:例如
他提及的老人的時候 他不會只寫old or elderly 形容
他說 diagnosed with dementia ,多寫出固定的片語或是搭配詞會讓文章充滿一些亮點 使文章更鮮明具體
再強調一次 請大家把內容組織寫好,不要去寫高深文法或是單字
利用firstly, secondly 去清楚地帶出理由
善用連接詞:thus
用了很多片語 keep them company
Developing policy
be willing to
take turns
has been diagnosed with dementia 等等
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