宥侖資優英文粉絲團

同學說不能把它的全名寫出來。他說他怕被發現。呵呵...

台中一中
高二嚴X宸

2022/9/17
提示: 時光機(time machine)或時空旅行(time travel)是許多人幢憬的未來可能會實現的夢想，請以此為主題，寫一篇文長至少120個單詞的英文作文。文分兩段，第一段說明你對時空旅行的了解及看法；第二段描述如果可以穿越時空，你會希望前往何時何地並說明其緣由。
It is acknowledged that we have an optimistic outlook for the technology in the future. In fact, as is referred to the text, time machine is the most popular among the inventions, the account of which can fall into the following three parts. First of all, time travel allows us to travel to the period whenever we would like to be(argument). For example, it is absolutely the best invention for the history maniac since they have access to the truth of the past. On top of that, we always make mistakes and regret at what we’ve done. Sometimes, it strikes us that we could’ve done something to avoid the consequences. What’s more, we might not only ruin things but also our cherished relationship(argument). Therefore, time machine can provide us with an opportunity to make the right decision. Last but not least, there is one point which drives people insane. As a matter of fact, with time travel, we can know the future(argument). Simple as it seemed, our life can become successful and invincible. In truth, our life is composed of decisions, and they determine our future. Since we don’t know what will happen, people have different lives. However, we are able to get the result that we long for by seeing the future and changing the present, not to mention stocks and gambling.
If I recieved a time machine, I would like to go back to the time I had a fight with my father(argument), the causes of which can boil down to the following two dimensions. On the one hand, I wish I could have controlled my emotions rather than yelled at him. After all, he just ate the pizza without sanitizing hands during the pandemic. In contrast, I could’ve indicate that it could lead to fatal infection. On the other hand, I would apologize to my mother for she managed to cope with the silent treatment we gave to each other. To her utter and sheer disappointment, we still had no interaction for a long time until both of us forgot the dispute. Although it was something that took place a long time ago, I evoke the memory when I feast on pizza. In the long run, time travel will influence humans magnificently and alter the society thoroughly. From the aforementioned, they are the reasons why I desire to travel back to the old times.

這是我們今年高一學生的作文，只上了5次課。寫105學測作文題目(家事分工)，除了一段把結論寫進去之外，其他的部分，真的很驚豔。

提示：你認為家裡生活環境的維持應該是誰的責任?請寫一篇短文說明你的看法。文分兩段，第一段說明你對家事該如何分工的看法與理由(條列式)，第二段舉例說明你家中家事分工的情形，並描述你自己做家事的經驗及感想(故事)。[105學測作文]

明道高一資優班陳彥宇

It is acknowledged that ancient China was a patriarchal society, which led to a scene of women doing all the housework/house chores at home. With time elapsing, women's rights began to be emphasized, even some women started to work in this society. However, the unfair situation still hasn't been corrected. As a matter of fact, as is referred to the text, it is my contention that every member should help do some housework(主題論點), the accounts of which can be composed of the following two domains(帶出文章組織). To begin with, everyone is obliged to do some housework, no matter if you are a man or a woman. Take my mom for example.even though she had a hard time at work, she still prepared our supper as usual. In addition, a family can’t be built up with just a father or a mother, all of us are a part of this tremendous machine. If one of us stops operating, the others will be compelled to shut off. Generally speaking, it is essential that we should divide the housework, not only for ourselves, but also for our family(第一段不需要做結論).
As far as my experiences are concerned, the following is the division of housework in our family. First of all, my father is in charge of cutting fruits and washing dishes. Secondly, on the grounds that my mom is skillful in cooking, hence she is responsible for dinner and many other piecemeal housework. Last of all, my brother and I, one does the laundry, hangings up the clothes, as well as taking out the garbage, while the other is required to fold the clothing. Although our division isn’t as perfect as ideal, we still strive to separate our parent’s stress by starting to make an attempt at their work. All in all, each of us need to do our part to make our family better.

恭喜曉明女中王俐棋同學在國二就通過英檢中高級測驗。
真是太優秀了!

102年指考作文

明道高二資優班杜允善
明道高二資優班龐曉聖

這樣的作文，應該很少高二的學生可以超越，高三的應該也不多。
呵呵!

我們學生的作文比大考中心公布的佳作優秀許多。

允善是國三升高一的暑假的來上課的。高二上以後其實寫作的實力已經很紮實。今年英文學測作文題目，超難發揮的。但是運用我們的上課教得片語與句型，依舊輕鬆寫出一篇水準之上的作文。

英文寫作的實力靠得是時間的累積。我們的課程，提供紮實的訓練。

明道高二杜允善
It is acknowledged that parks are crucial for individuals living in urban areas to engage in some recreation and have an access to natural scenery. As a matter of fact, as is referred to the text, the following is my contention with regard to the features of the parks portrayed on the pictures. Frankly speaking , the park portrayed on picture A is distinguished for providing a wealth of recreational facilities which kids are likely to take delight in. Not only does it contribute to a desirable environment for children to exercise but it also reduces the burden on parents effectively. As for the park depicted on the picture B, it is trees that the park is mainly composed of, which is full of natural atmosphere/vibe.
As far as the desirable park in my mind is concerned, it is fundamental that it should be surrounded by forests along with a large diversity of wild animals, the justification of which can boil down to the following two aspects. To start with, I am of the opinion that the magical power of nature is capable of indulging individuals in it without pressure. In fact , only if we develop an environment which is identical to Nature in the urban areas will we be able to get rid of the stress on a regular basis. On top of that, there is a great likelihood that the park which is full of green trees is capable of optimizing contaminated air produced by vehicles and factories. To put it in a nutshell, it is vital that we should promote the development of parks actively which is beneficial to optimize the urban environment so that we are able to possess a more healthy daily lives.

#111年學測作文

宇婷的作文，其他同學看完後都說好強喔！

本篇這麼無聊的題目，可以寫成這樣，到底是誰教的阿？哈哈⋯

上圖為今年指考的作文題目，下圖為本班平時練習的考題。是不是有異曲同功之妙呢？

作文的練習，需要結合時事，訓練同學們的思考力！本屆要應試的同學，加油喔！我們有最充足的題型讓你們來熟練四種作文組織！祝你們即將面臨的學測考試順利！

孟宣暑假過後才來，但是進步也超快的!恭喜她英文作文順利拿到15分。

看不到這個學生進步的盡頭，好恐怖！

有些同學才上幾次課，寫得就很好。一點點的拼字錯誤、一點點的文法錯誤⋯一點點都沒有影響到文章的流暢度！

佳作欣賞啦！