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有一天學生拿到一個作文題目: 你贊不贊成”高等教育”普及化📚📚📚
📍第一段先定義”什麼是高等教育”，說明.
高等教育在台灣的情況及影響。
📍第二段就贊成或不贊成提出說服的理由

When it comes to the popularization of high-level education in Taiwan, it seems a phenomena that every adult in Taiwan at least owns a bachelor degree which is regarded as a minimum requirement for the future job. However, the excessive number of undergrates, graduates, and doctors leads to more intensive employment competition than before. Thus, one may concern whther the expansion of higher education is essential in a developed country. This issue has prons and cons. In my personal viewpoint, I agree each individual should gain high education. Here are the following reasons.🖍

Firstly, as a proverb goes, “knowledge is power.” If a country can afford each student higher education, they can be developed as future professionals on each field. Without doubt, they serve as the most human treasure resources in Taiwan. Second, high education should be the way for those who crave for knowledge to access. Instead, it can’t be the place where people just pursue to gain diploma. Thus, my personal concern is that each student within their learning process should find what their potential and talents are, which means every good education system is to train students to find their future road and to fulfill their goals in life. Otherwise, high academic level will lose its real meaning. 📝📝

~學生寫作分享~

🌎天氣Weather🌎

blazing / flaming/ scorching sun ☀️ 💥
gentle /pleasant /delightful breeze⛅️
penetrating / violent / blustery wind💨
golden / hazy / tepid shunshine🌫
gloomy / misty /dreary drizzle☔️
severe / devastating / deadly blizzard🌊
magical / seasonal / scenic snow-falling❄️
raining cats and dogs; bucketing down
sunshower; deluge; downpour💧💦⛄️

Learn How to be Concise in a Writing
Concise簡潔的: expressed using only a few words, but in a way that is easy to understand🖍🖍

She was a funny little old lady who had no sense of humor at all but was still funny or strange or something because she never came out of her house in the day at all but rather she came out her house only at night to go to the store or go to see people or to go any place. 🍀🍀

She was a little old lady without a sense of humor. She was funny but strange because she never came out of her house at day. On the contrary, she went to the grocery store or visited friends at night.🍁🍁

🖍🖍即時白板創作

by Emily🎨🎨🎨

📍📍Avoid Redundancy in a Writing 📍📍

: use more words than necessary to express something, especially repetitive words or phrases in a sentence that mean the same
thing.🍃🍃


**He was really very tired and weary of working or going to work and he
planned to quit or stop working and retire. (Oh, No! too… wordy)**

**He was really weary of working, so he planned to quit the job.** 🌾🌾


~小叮嚀: Always keep concise in a writing~💯💯






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