21/08/2026
Step-by-Step Approach to Writing an Essay ( 1)
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Step 1: EDITING EXERCISE
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Editing Exercise: Find the mistakes in the essay and correct them.
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Essay question: Students who are studying for important school exams should stop sports lessons. Discuss.
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Some parents may think that while there childrens are preparing for important school exams, they shouldn’t has sports lessons. This could be because they want them to focuss on exam subjects more, like science and maths. For a similar reason, some parents think childrens should also stop painting and music lesson in the final school term so they can spent more time study. However, I disagree with this views, and believe that children should continue having sport lessons. This lessons help student keep healthy and happyness during the exam period.
Firstly, schools need to encouraged young peoples to following a healthy lifestyle and get regularly exercise. Many young people doesn’t do enough exercise. They prefer spend there free time indoor on their computer or watching TV then going to the park and play tennis, or go cycling.
Many people today are overweighted and has health problem. There is alot of informations about eating healthy, but people often forget that regularly exercise are equally important. Secondary, exercise help us feel less stress and tiring. It also improve memorys and help we thinking clearly. When students is studying for exams, it’s good idea to take regularly breaks and do something actives for 20 minute. Exercise also help us to concentrating better on difficult task and helps we sleeps good at night. Doing exercises may even helps student got better result in their exams.
In conclusions, I believes that students who are revising for important exam should continuing to has sports lessons because regularly exercise is good for their bodies and mind.