10/11/2015
“My mama is a woman, flawless and formidable in the same step. / Woman walks into a warzone and has warriors cowering at her feet,” writes Yale senior Emtithal "Emi" Mahmoud in her poem, “Mama” -- for her stellar performance of this and her other work, Mahmoud won the Individual World Poetry Slam Championship in Washington, D.C. last month. The Sudanese American, who went from a novice poetry slammer to the world champion in only four years, says that her victory was a shock: “I was like, ‘Wait, what? That just happened?’”
Mahmoud is originally from the Darfur region of Sudan, but her family escaped to Yemen while she was still a toddler. However, her parents continued to work to raise awareness of the genocide in their home country. “They wanted to protect us from what was actually happening,” she explains. “When I insisted they tell me, they did. I just picked up a pen and started writing and going on speaking tours with them.” After Mahmoud discovered spoken word performance as a freshman at Yale, she auditioned for the university's two spoken-word team but didn't make the cut. “Of course I didn’t get in," she says. "It was the first time I ever tried." Undaunted, she joined a spoken word club, ¡Oye!, and honed her skills. A few months later she made the Yale Slam Team and participated in her first competition last year.
Her performance and victory at the World Championship in October was bittersweet; Mahmoud learned shortly before the competition began that her grandmother had died. She had decided not to attend so she could be with her parents but they urged her to go, telling her that her grandmother would have wanted her to participated. “My grandma never learned how to read or write. They didn’t teach women how to do that back then in my country,” she explains. “[W]hen she was staying with us here, she was always over my shoulder: ‘Do your thing. Read, read, write.’”
At the competition, she earned perfect scores with her first two poems and made it to the final round. That night, since she had used her two best works in the first rounds, Mahmoud finished her poem “Mama” and wrote a tribute to her grandmother for the finals. Even with only a few hours to practice her new poems, she received a standing ovation in the middle of her final round performance. “It was the craziest thing,” she marvels. “People were so receptive; you could lose yourself on stage and everyone was there to hold you.”
Mahmoud used the competition “to expel some of the emotion [from her grandmother's death] in poetry so I wouldn’t be there moping and feeling sad.” She believes that it's important to confront such emotions instead of allowing them to "become a part of you" and take control. In "Mama," she wrote: “I was walking down the street when a man stopped me and said, / ‘Hey yo sistah, you from the motherland?... you got a little bit of flavor in you, / I’m just admiring what your mama gave you’… Don’t talk about my flavor unless you know that / My flavor is insurrection, it is rebellion, resistance... I turned to the man and said, / My mother and I can’t walk the streets alone back home any more. / Back home, there are no streets to walk any more.”
As for other aspiring poets out there, Mahmoud offers these words of advice: “[W]hen you go up there on the stage, you have a right to be there. Anything you say is worth listening to; your exercise of human expression is important. And I think that’s the most important thing to remember.”
To read more about Emi Mahmoud's story and a transcript of her poem "Mama" on Yale News, visit http://bit.ly/1MsA1fH. You can also follow her on Facebook at Emi Mahmoud Neopriestess.
For more poetry exploring the mother-daughter relationship, we highly recommend the illustrated edition of Sarah Kay’s poem “B” (http://www.amightygirl.com/b) and “Borrowed Names: Poems about Laura Ingalls Wilder, Madam C.J. Walker, Marie Curie, and Their Daughters” (http://www.amightygirl.com/borrowed-names)
For ways to help strengthen the mother-daughter relationship, including by writing a shared journal together, check out the recommendations in our blog post, “A Mighty Bond: Books to Deepen Mother-Daughter Relationships,” at http://www.amightygirl.com/blog?p=10003
To encourage your children's interest in creative writing, visit our blog post on "Fantastic Adventures and Amazing Tales: Encouraging Creative Writing and Storytelling" for a selection of writing-oriented books, toys, and activities for both children and teens at http://www.amightygirl.com/blog?p=4937
Included among the recommendations are three excellent guides for aspiring young writers: "Writing Magic: Creating Stories That Fly" for ages 8 to 12 (http://www.amightygirl.com/writing-magic), "Spilling Ink: A Young Writer’s Handbook" for ages 9 to 14 (http://www.amightygirl.com/spilling-ink), and "Seize the Story" for ages 12 to 17 (http://www.amightygirl.com/seize-the-story)