English for SSC

Find the error in the following passage, including the placement of commas and fullstops. Pls write your answer in comment section. If there is no error, pls mention 'NE' in the comment section. Thanks

"Rabindranath Tagore, the youngest of the 13 children of Debendranath Tagore and Sarda Devi was conferred upon with an order of Knighthood award by King George V in 1915, but Rabindranath Tagore refused the award after 13th April 1919 Jaliawalan Bagh Massacre to protest the heinous action taken by General O Dyer."

Which of the following is an adverb

1.TIME
2. TIMELY

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FIND THE ERROR :-
Acceptance is not about allowing everything to occur or to go on, (1)/ it is neither related to passivity and weakness, (2)/ nor is it about confirmation or mediocrity. (3)/ No error (4)