09/09/2026
還記得小時候寫遊記,只會寫“It was very hot.”、“I was cold.” 嗎?
在我們的 Young Writer 課堂上,孩子們正在學習一項魔法——Show, Don't Tell(展示,不說教)。
上週的主題是 「Where in the World」,我們帶著孩子用文字「神遊」了三個截然不同的世界:
🌴 悶熱潮濕、生機勃勃的亞馬遜雨林
❄️ 寂靜冰冷、讓骨頭顫抖的南極大陸
🚢 充滿柴油味與文化碰撞的香港天星小輪
來看看學生們是怎麼寫的——他們不說“It was hot”,而是寫:
“The sunrays were as hot as a burning fire, and moist, warm air made sweat roll down my flushed cheeks.”
他們不說“It was cold”,而是寫:
“The cold air made my bones shiver and the rest of my body stiff and numb.”
當孩子學會用細節、動作和感官來刻畫場景,寫作就不再是擠不出字的痛苦,而是揮灑創意的享受。
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