12/05/2026
One of my favourite picture books is Carol Anne Duffy's 'Lost Happy Endings'. It’s a beautiful story with fantastic language and a slightly edgier feel to a traditional fairy tale. This year, I used this story as the hook to explore: rich vocabulary, atmosphere and storytelling ✍️
Before writing their own independent narrative pieces, we built up the skills needed step by step:
👉using powerful adjectives to describe settings and characters
👉exploring the difference between positive and negative descriptions
👉securing sentence demarcation and punctuation
👉using time openers to mark new sections of a story and help writing flow smoothly
Everything is taught in context, lesson by lesson, so the children can gradually apply new skills with confidence rather than feeling overwhelmed.
By the end of the unit, they had produced cohesive pieces of writing full of atmosphere, detail and imagination - they even got to write this up in gold pen on black paper!