30/09/2026
Good writing rarely comes from simply being told to “write more.”
Sometimes children need the right prompts, models and discussion to help them see what stronger writing can look like. And almost always, children benefit from saying their sentences out loud before writing them down. In tuition lessons there is so much talking involved before the writing, and what a difference this makes!
In this online lesson, we explored different sentence openers and used them to create more atmospheric writing.
Rather than repeatedly starting sentences with The, He or It, children were encouraged to experiment with openers such as:
Suddenly...
Without warning...
Beneath the moon...
In the distance...
Online lessons give us the chance to model, discuss, edit and improve writing together, while still giving each child time to think independently.
Strong writing grows from strong teaching, careful feedback and lots of opportunities to play with language.
Online English tuition is available across primary, 11+, GCSE and beyond.