17/10/2026
These shots are from Session 3 of our Third Draft Part 2 course, where writers explore the emotional structure of their scenes.
A powerful scene does more than move the plot forward. It challenges the character’s values and builds towards an emotional tipping point, a moment that changes how they see the situation and what they decide to do next.
The writers are exploring the moral problem at the heart of a scene, the surprising emotions their character might experience, and the details that make those feelings vivid and believable. Each scene becomes part of the character’s deeper journey of change.
As Donald Maass says, “Artful fiction surprises readers with their own feelings.”
Through writing and group feedback, writers look beyond what their characters are feeling to ask what the reader will experience. It’s an exciting opportunity to uncover new layers of meaning and make their scenes more moving and memorable.
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