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, erotica, new age, lifestyle, and the many sub-genres of those already mentioned. Flood Manuscripts provides constructive commentary on your writing, its qualities, integrity and weaknesses in terms of craft and creativity, the assessors highlighting any issues the manuscript might have and drawing your attention to positive aspects of the work. Assessors can also provide advice about your work and the market in Australia and elsewhere. Flood Manuscripts offers a transparent approach to manuscript assessment (manuscript appraisal). Our aim is to help you improve your writing and develop your manuscript towards successful publication. Got an essay or story on the boil but feel you need professional help before that deadline? Finally come to the end of your manuscript and want to know what you need to do next? In need of a skilled proofreader, an editor or copy editor? Dreaming of a mentor who can help get your work off the ground or assist you to fly higher? In addition to assessment (appraisal), we provide a selection of further services, from mini-assessment through proofing, copy editing and ms development to full structural editing.

A remarkable and skilful work. The balance of historical info with contemporary exactness, the detailed evocation of the...
17/08/2026

A remarkable and skilful work. The balance of historical info with contemporary exactness, the detailed evocation of these Chinese lives, the marvellous characterisation and the deft handling of their progression all had me increasingly impressed as I progressed. Flood Manuscripts' client, Isabelle Li's first published novel, The Northern Tomb (Puncher&Wattman 2026) is funny, endearing, quietly moving. Li has already established her name as a writer of remarkable sensibilities with her short stories, some collected in her first book, A Chinese Affair (NewSouth Books, Margaret River Press 2016). The novel certainly leaves a lot open for discussion on various levels, and that can only be good. Prose writer, scriptwriter and translator, Li has a second novel well in progress and she is certainly a storyteller you will want to return to.

05/08/2026

Alexander Howard reviews the Miles Franklin shortlist.
Discipline, Randa Abdel-Fattah
Discipline is the most provocative novel on this year’s shortlist. Published in the shadow of the current conflict in Gaza, set during the Israeli bombardment in May 2021, Randa Abdel-Fattah’s novel treats fiction as a form of political argument.
It operates simultaneously at two scales. On the macro level, it examines how conflict in the Middle East has the capacity to reshape Australian universities, media organisations and public discourse. At the micro level, it follows an academic and a journalist, together with their families and communities, as they grapple with the personal and professional consequences of those events. This strident novel insists these two scales cannot be separated.
There is real intellectual ambition here, together with a willingness to confront some of the most divisive and traumatic political questions of the present – without equivocation. Abdel-Fattah asks what fiction can contribute to debates more often shaped by headlines, social media and competing ideological claims.
At times, however, that ambition outstrips the novel’s prose and plotting, with characters occasionally carrying ideas more readily than they inhabit fully realised fictional lives. These are the risks of writing a novel that seeks, unabashedly, to intervene in its historical moment.
Fierceland, Omar Musa
Omar Musa’s Fierceland is the most formally exuberant novel on the shortlist. Best thought of as an acutely self-conscious, sort of postmodern, postcolonial epic, it weaves together individual and shared histories of empire, environmental degradation and destruction, and familial inheritance, spanning Malaysian Borneo, Australia and the west coast of the United States.
The plot follows siblings Roz and Harun as they return to Borneo after the death of their father, a wealthy palm-oil magnate whose fortune was built on the evils of deforestation and dispossession. Determined to make amends for that part of his legacy, they embark on a journey that becomes a reckoning with family history and an exploration of the afterlives of empire.
Musa’s background as a poet, rapper and visual artist is evident on pretty much every page. Fierceland moves freely between prose and poetry, drawing on popular culture and mythology, oscillating between voices and registers, experimenting with typography and embracing an episodic structure that continually reinvents itself.
At times, that abundance leaves the novel feeling a bit diffuse. Not every experiment lands with equal force, and there are moments when the sheer number of ideas can prove distracting. Yet these excesses feel inseparable from the novel’s larger aims. At a moment when literary fiction can seem increasingly cautious in its formal choices, Fierceland makes the case for boldness and creative risk. And that is surely a good thing.
First Name Second Name, Steve MinOn
First Name Second Name, equal parts family saga, road novel and zombie story, is geographically and thematic ambitious.
Steve MinOn, winner of the emerging category at the 2023 Queensland Literary Awards, tracks four generations of a migrant family across Australia, China, England and Scotland. He presents the reader with a narrative both global in scale and indisputably Australian in its concerns. Questions of inheritance and identity stretch across continents and countries, without ever losing sight of the local.
First Name Second Name, which also displays an interest in the conceits of autofiction, toggles confidently between realism and the fantastical, using genre to ponder questions of sexuality and cultural belonging. At its centre sits Stephen Bolin, who escapes from the morgue after his death and begins the long, strange journey back to Far North Queensland, where he was born and wants to be buried. Reanimated by supernatural forces he does not fully comprehend, Stephen’s peculiar posthumous pilgrimage runs alongside memories of his fraught relationship with his conservative father and his struggle for acceptance.
MinOn’s prose occasionally lacks the assurance of the book’s larger conception. Some metaphors feel a touch overextended or strain for effect. Even so, the novel’s expansive geographical scope and generic inventiveness make for a memorable debut.
Little World, Josephine Rowe
Little World is the shortest book on this year’s shortlist, though its modest length disguises remarkable depth. Josephine Rowe is one of Australia’s finest prose stylists, and this novella demonstrates why.
Her sentences are lyrical without becoming ornamental, creating a dreamlike atmosphere that remains firmly anchored in the physical world. For example, when we encounter “an animal thumping through the ruin of what had once been a house, a bird preparing its home above a lintel” and the guiding narratial voice “is aware of the sea drawing closer”.
The book opens in northwestern Australia during the 1950s, when the preserved body of a child saint arrives at the home of retired engineer Orrin Bird. Outwardly dead and unable to speak, she is in fact sentient, silently observing the lives of those who gather around her. As the narrative moves across decades and continents, Rowe reveals how her presence binds people together.
Rowe’s prose reflects a sustained engagement with literary experimentation and modernist aesthetic conventions. Her winding syntax and fluid movement between memory and perception unsettle conventional ways of seeing and understanding, while remaining acutely attentive to landscapes and textures of everyday life.
Suggesting more than explaining, Little World demonstrates how much can be achieved within a compressed form. It is one of the most distinctive reading experiences on this year’s list.
My Heart At Evening, Konrad Muller
My Heart at Evening is the first work published by the new, Hobart-based Evercreech Editions. It makes a strong case for the publisher’s ambitions.
Konrad Muller’s debut revisits one of colonial Tasmania’s enduring mysteries: the 1832 death of surveyor Henry Hellyer. Sent to Van Diemen’s Land to investigate Hellyer’s apparent su***de, Jorgen Jorgensen uncovers a world conditioned in equal measure by hearsay and rumour.
Part historical mystery, part mediation on the legacies of empire and annihilation, My Heart At Evening examines how societies construct their own myths while suppressing unpalatable truths. Muller plays with the conventions of detective fiction to great effect. The investigation into Hellyer’s death becomes a means of exposing the political and psychological conditions that made it possible, while also commenting on the cruelty and the violence of the colonial frontier.
The result is a a novel that speaks as directly to the present as it does to the past. Muller’s prose is poetic and atmospheric, capturing both the beauty of the Tasmanian landscape and the unease that lurks beneath the surface.
At times, Muller tends towards the elliptical, for good reason – though to explain why would diminish the novel’s conceptual spark. My Heart At Evening is an impressive debut and an auspicious beginning for a publisher that has arrived with genuine literary intent.
You Must Remember This, Sean Wilson
You Must Remember This is unexpectedly prescient. Dementia has become Australia’s leading cause of death, and Sean Wilson’s second novel speaks directly to one of the defining experiences of an ageing society.
The short book follows Grace as dementia progressively erodes her memory and, with it, her sense of self. Wilson abandons linear chronology, jumbling the order of chapters and moving freely across decades as memories surface, disappear and return in altered forms, despite Grace’s best efforts to preserve them. Early in the novel, for instance, she “tries to record the scene in her mind, tries to burn it into her memory so she can keep hold of the image for later”. The discontinuous structure is formally adventurous, yet never feels experimental for its own sake. Its fractured chronology gives readers access to Grace’s increasingly disordered consciousness.
Wilson’s treatment of dementia is resolutely neither sensationalist nor exploitative. He offers a compassionate account of the disease’s effects on both those who live with it and those who care for them, while never losing sight of Grace’s dignity or humanity.
Admittedly, there are moments when the dialogue feels stilted, sitting uneasily alongside the novel’s more metaphorically charged passages. But these are minor reservations in a work whose formal aspiration is consistently matched to its subject.

30/07/2026

Interesting post on AI translation sales figures on 20 books to 50k. 'Update: AI Translations
Hello! There's been a lot of talk about AI translations the last few days, so I wanted to give an update on mine, if only to dispel some misinformation. I write dark contemporary romance.
So, some numbers straight away. I switched to AI last year and this is how my translations have done so far:
Dutch: 18,089.86
German: 57,070.79
French: 38,648.13
Italian: 24,053.77
Brazilian Portuguese: 3,495.76
Spanish: 3,061.13
Total: 144,419.44
Ad Spend: 32849.49
Profit: 111,569.95 USD
Reviews:
Averages range, but my reviews are great in Germany, France, Italy, and Brazil. Rougher for Dutch, but sales are still good. And I barely have any for Spanish.
Disclosure:
I only disclose that they're AI to Amazon. I don't put this on Amazon and no one has ever asked who my translator is.
Ads:
I run Facebook ads for my translations, but FB has gotten so out of control lately, that I've turned the majority of my ads off.
KU or Wide:
I'm in KU for every language except for Dutch. The Netherlands doesn't have KU, so there wasn't much choice there, but KoboPlus has been great for my Dutch translations.
Program:
I use ScribeShadow for the majority of my translations, but this year I switched to KindleTranslate for Spanish, and I'm going to make the same switch for Portuguese.
KT has not been a moneymaker for me. Searchability isn't great for the translations, and it doesn't help that they don't get their own product page.
Editing/Proofreading:
I started out with unedited translations, and made 93k last year with them. This year, I'm having German, French, and Italian proofread because I know I'll make my money back in those languages. The rest I'm leaving unedited.
Print:
I do release the paperbacks with the translations, but they've only made about 2k out of the total. I don't sell many paperbacks overall though, so keep that mind.
Covers:
I keep my original English title/cover and just opted for a flag to show that it's a different language edition.
Backlash:
There has been zero backlash, and I've been at this for over a year. I'm not going to say that readers don't care about reading AI translations, because I don't speak for anyone else, but I will say that my translations are selling just fine, my reviews are just fine, and I'm happy with the results.
Should You Do AI Translations?
I don't know. That's for you to decide, because the only one who should be making decisions for your business is you. And I'm going to repeat that so hopefully it sinks in:
The only one who should be making decisions for your business is you.'

88 y.o. FloodMss client Sylvia Webber's latest compendium of family works. I think this is her 6th published book, mainl...
20/07/2026

88 y.o. FloodMss client Sylvia Webber's latest compendium of family works. I think this is her 6th published book, mainly for teens, with a few others in the wings, but it's hard to keep up with her output.

Click through to the mind-boggling volume of known publisher scams.
04/07/2026

Click through to the mind-boggling volume of known publisher scams.

Philippine Publishing Scams List READ THIS FIRST! Below is Writer Beware’s most up-to-date list of names and email addresses used by the many publishing scams operating out of the Philippines, despite their US/Canadian/UK addresses and phone numbers. All of the listings here are supported by resea...

Moaning on cloning. Makes me wonder whether doing an edition would ever be worth it.
10/06/2026

Moaning on cloning. Makes me wonder whether doing an edition would ever be worth it.

Pirate versions of bestselling books are swamping YouTube. Barbara Cartland’s voice will be cloned for her audiobooks. And audiobook giants are embracing AI voices.

24/05/2026

It has been alleged that the judges of the Commonwealth Short Story Prize have been duped by an author using AI in his winning entry. Jamir Nazir’s The Serpent in the Grove, which won for the Caribbean region, was then published in leading literary magazine Granta, along with other winning entries.
Almost immediately, it attracted accusations of being
AI-generated. Users on X posted screenshots of reports from AI detection tool Pangram, which claim 100% of the text was AI authored. Of course, the reliability of such tools can’t be guaranteed.
Sigrid Rausing, publisher of Granta, which was not involved in selecting the story, said in a statement that she showed the story to Claude AI and asked if it was AI-generated. “The response was long, concluding that it was ‘almost certainly not produced unaided by a human.’” Again, this may tell us nothing. The New York Times and the Guardian have contacted Nazir for a response to the allegations, but they report he has not responded.
Where does this leave literary prizes, literary writing, and the literary short story?
Razmi Farook, the Commonwealth Foundation’s director general, has defended the integrity of the prize’s judging process. Using AI checkers on unpublished submissions “would raise significant concerns surrounding consent and artistic ownership”. Competitions like the Commonwealth Prize, she notes, must operate on a “principle of trust”.
Stories should be received on a principle of trust – but that may be hard to maintain. This year has already seen revelations of significant AI use in a New York Times book review and a debut horror novel. Maybe standards for short fiction will need to shift.
The Commonwealth Writers Prize is open to submissions from adult citizens of Commonwealth member states. It typically attracts thousands of submissions each year. Judging panels for each of the award’s regions (Africa, Asia, the Caribbean, Europe and Canada, and the Pacific) decide on regional winners, who are all published in Granta. An overall winner is also chosen.
The Serpent in the Grove was praised by the regional judging panel for its “vivid, lush imagery” and “quiet authority”. It tells the story of a young, unhappily married couple, living in poverty in their rural village, alongside their older, gossipy neighbour. A near – though not entirely accidental – brush with death unexpectedly unites the three of them, creating an awareness of the hidden, subterranean stories that shape their lives and locality.
Writers, literary critics and commentators on X and other platforms have derided what they see as its “obvious” AI writing syntax.
The frequent use of “not x, but y” sentence structures and unusual word repetition have been presented as textual evidence.
The story also includes, to put it charitably, a few choice sentences you’d have to hope were written by a robot.
As Booker Prize winning author Marlon James put it on Facebook:
forget AI for a minute. A story won an International Competition with a line like this: “The girl smiled like sunrise over a sink.”
But AI usage is difficult to prove. Detection tools are not reliable and have been known to hallucinate their results. Just because the story feels AI generated to many readers, with its somewhat overworked, metaphor-laden prose, hazily dramatised action and slippery refusal to commit to a concrete subject or theme doesn’t necessarily make it the case. It eventually concludes with a string of poetic aphorisms:
A story is a well
It eats sound until somebody throws a rope
If grace is near and hands hold, something breathing comes up.
Ultimately, Rausing has taken a noncommittal stance, stating “perhaps we will never know” if the story was authored by AI.
A new AI milestone?
If the Serpent in the Grove is AI generated, perhaps a new milestone has been reached, with AI now managing to produce the kind of “quotidian, plotless, moment-of-truth revelatory story” that United States author Michael Chabon warned was coming to dominate publications and prize lists.
Regardless of its provenance, I suspect that if you entered the prompt “write a short story that will get at least a regional shortlisting for an international prize” into the AI platform of your choice, something like Serpent in the Grove would be the likely result.
Everything about it, from its frequently solid, if routine, descriptive passages (“Inside, air clung thick as porridge skin: damp earth, woodsmoke, and the sour tang of fermenting cocoa”) to its occasionally sharp observations (“Men who set traps plan for silence, not for the squeal.”) to its outright howlers (“She had the kind of walking that made benches become men”) feels true to the form. And like something that could be created by an authentically human literary mediocrity.
It’s every bit of worthy filler you’ve found padding out the middle of a debut collection published straight out of a prestigious MFA (Master of Fine Arts) writing workshop. It’s every short story you’ve ever skipped past in the New Yorker to get to the film reviews and the caption competition.
What’s the solution?
Certainly, there is still at least a possibility that this small scandal may fall into the time-honoured tradition of the literary hoax.
Despite the bio note by Nazir, a 63-year old resident of Trinidad and Tobago, claiming to be “a prolific poet and author”, readers have had difficulty tracking down any other works. His LinkedIn profile reveals he has previously written on the possibility of AI eliminating jobs and the AI arms race.
The Serpent in the Grove may yet prove to be a parody or a warning.
Advances in AI platforms and composition have often been oddly benchmarked through their engagements with the form of the short story. The launch of ChatGPT saw a major science fiction magazine having to temporarily close submissions due to being bombarded with AI-generated stories.
Last year, Sam Altman of Open AI triumphantly claimed to have been “struck” by how his AI model “got the vibe of metafiction so right” in following his prompt to write “a metafictional literary short story about AI and grief”.
And AI generation can now clearly produce the kind of technically competent creative writing that The Serpent in the Grove exemplifies (the occasional glories of a smile that is “like sunrise over a sink” aside). - Julian Novitz for The Conversation

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