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Literary Column: Exploring the Depths of 'Perception' by Dr. Zik

Introduction

Dr. Zik's poem "Perception," composed in February 2024, stands as an exemplar of the Zikelite form within the Zikorean poetic tradition. The poem, characterized by its brevity and spiritual depth, encapsulates profound themes of divine love and spiritual devotion. The three lines evoke a sense of surrender and recognition of the divine presence, a sentiment that resonates with many readers worldwide.

The Poem

Perception:
The name of my lord
The most merciful, bountiful

I need nothing else
I see you my, lord

Structural Analysis:

This composition reflects the essence of a Zikelite poem, marked by a concise structure and profound thematic depth. The poem’s syllabic arrangement aligns with the Zikelite criteria, where the balance of syllables emphasizes the rhythmic and reflective quality of the verses. The spiritual undertones and the straightforward yet impactful message enhance the poem's resonance with themes of divine perception and fulfillment.

Community Engagement and Commentary

The poem has garnered significant appreciation, as reflected in the thoughtful comments and interactions by readers and fellow poets. Here is an overview of the prominent feedback:

Barantoff (Canada): Highlighted the straightforwardness of the poem and the emphasis created by the repetition of the first word, enriching its thematic depth.

Newfiegirl118 : Expressed that the poem is timely and relevant, emphasizing the importance of recognizing the Lord's grace. The comment underscores the universal need for spiritual awareness.

VMarie83 (United States): Appreciated the poem's beauty and thanked Dr. Zik for sharing, reflecting the simplicity and profundity of the message.

Sidneyconrad23 (North Carolina, United States ): Praised the poem as words of wisdom and truth, extending blessings and highlighting the poem's positive impact.

Adikaran: Commended the poem's simplicity and emotional depth, thanking the poet for the inspiration.

Poeta Malume of Brazil: Offered a comprehensive critique, acknowledging the poem's divine inspiration and spiritual depth. He connected the poem to biblical references, notably the mercies of the Lord as expressed by Prophet Jeremiah. Malume appreciated the bilateral communion between humanity and divinity captured in the poem and emphasized the poet's role in representing Zikorean poetry in Brazil.

Cherr (United Kingdom): Found the poem uplifting and appreciated its focus on glorifying the Almighty.

Narayana Narayana: Noted the personal and spiritual connection depicted in the line "I see you my, lord," reinforcing the idea of inner divine perception.

Terence Cummings-Smith (Pennsylvania, United States): Acknowledged the poem as a profound profession of faith, recognizing its spiritual sincerity.

Matt29 (United Kingdom): Reflected on the spiritual realization portrayed in the poem, recognizing the depiction of divine mercy and provision.

Edenbray (United Kingdom): Complimented the minimalist yet insightful approach, appreciating the poem's clean and profound delivery.

Patterson-Mooney (Pennsylvania, United States ): Expressed strong affirmation through words of faith and gratitude, resonating with the poem's spiritual message.

Kaye: Reflected on the broader implications of faith and divine guidance, relating it to life’s journey.

Earthpassion (Colorado, United States ): Appreciated the poem as a gentle and significant reminder of spiritual truths.

Sirius Rising (Texas, United States): Encouraged continued creative expression, acknowledging the poem's impact.

P K ROY: Praised the content and thoughtful expression, recognizing the poem's depth.

Violinstrings (United States): Simply described the poem as beautiful, reflecting a heartfelt appreciation.

Conclusion:

The comments and interactions surrounding "Perception" reflect its significant emotional and spiritual impact. The poem not only reinforces the core tenets of the Zikorean tradition but also resonates with a universal longing for divine connection and understanding. Dr. Zik’s ability to encapsulate such depth in minimalistic form is a testament to his literary prowess and the global reach of Zikorean poetry.

This collective appreciation from poets and readers across diverse backgrounds underscores the universal relevance of the poem's message. "Perception" thus stands as a notable contribution to post-modern English literary history and the Zikorean movement, inspiring reflections on faith, love, and spiritual fulfillment.

My Son

some laypersons deceive only
useless poetry prose.

I own him as my son who knows
rhyme in life he goes

who loves sis and bro and parent.
and before Him bows

who is always caring for those
who live like a rose

Dr Zik
Jhelum Pakistan
July 01, 2024

Poem Overview:
The poem "My Son" by Dr. Zik is composed in the Zikelite poetic form, a structure from Zikorean poetry. The poem reflects deep values of love, care, and spiritual devotion. It emphasizes the significance of living a life of rhyme and harmony, respecting familial bonds, and showing reverence towards the divine. The recurring imagery of a rose symbolizes beauty, tenderness, and care, portraying the ideal characteristics of a son.

Likes and Comments Overview:
The poem received a total of 36 likes and multiple comments from fellow poets and readers, appreciating its heartfelt message and poetic structure.

Key Comments and Feedback:

Thomas W. Case: Described the poem as "Superb," indicating high appreciation for its quality and message.

Pacman21145: Found the poem to convey a "heartfelt simplicity" and deep familial connection. He also shared his own poem for feedback.

Ryan Geoffrey Hayward: Complimented the poem's syllabic flow, calling it "gorgeous." He provided constructive feedback on the last line, suggesting the word "lives" instead of "live."

Philthepoet (Phil Malone): Praised the poem's unique style and encouraged Dr. Zik to continue writing. He expressed appreciation for the poem's distinctive quality.

Owens Oracle (Owens Ezekiel): Admired the poem as a beautiful tribute to Dr. Zik's son, appreciating its presentation and emotional depth.

Author's Responses:
Dr. Zik responded graciously to each comment, expressing his appreciation for their thoughtful feedback. He particularly acknowledged Ryan Geoffrey Hayward for his insightful observation about the final line and showed gratitude towards each commenter for their support and encouragement.

Overall Reception:
The poem "My Son" has been well-received within the Zikorean poetry community, appreciated for its simplicity, emotional resonance, and adherence to the Zikelite form. It stands as a tribute not only to familial love but also to the broader principles of care and spiritual reflection promoted within Zikorean poetic philosophy.

Reference:

My Son by Dr. Zik at Allpoetry some laypersons deceive only useless poetry prose. I own him as my son who knows rhyme in life he goes who loves sis and bro and parent. and before Him bows who is always caring for those who live like a rose Dr Zik Jhelum Pakistan July 01, 2024

I See You Smiling
My pangs are although gigantic
I see you smiling

Sun shining, the moon reflecting
Your blessings, my Lord!

I am truly grateful for the overwhelming support and insightful comments from my fellow poets on my poem "I See You Smiling." It warms my heart to know that the lines, written in remembrance of the Lord, have resonated with so many of you.

Newfiegirl118 described the poem as "another lovely testament," which truly reflects the essence I intended to convey. Jessica Orr appreciated the structure and pace, noting its beauty. Narayana Narayana's words remind us that even in our hardest times, faith ensures we are never alone. P K ROY and Cherr highlighted the poem's ability to evoke a sense of hope and remembrance through its imagery of the sun and moon. Edenbray found inspiration in its brevity and faith amidst disorder.

Ed Ostrom's comment about the poem being a "truly inspiring read" is a testament to the uplifting power of poetry. RepeatedNap's reflection on the sun and moon as symbols of the Lord's smile added a humbling dimension to the interpretation. Prathibha.E pointed out the glory of both celestial bodies, which mirrors the poem's themes. D.L. Lewis and Sea Glass both appreciated the tribute to faith and the good Lord.

Kaye and Matt29 emphasized the themes of faith, love, and guidance, while Terence Cummings-Smith found that the poem inspired true faith. Stoddard beautifully encapsulated the poem's dedication to an almighty Lord who brings happiness to His children.

I am deeply thankful for each of your thoughtful words and for sharing in the love and reverence expressed in this poem. Your encouragement and reflections mean the world to me. Blessings to all.

Perception
The name of my lord
The most merciful, bountiful

I need nothing else
I see you my, lord

This Zikelite poem, composed by Zafar Iqbal Khokhar, beautifully captures the divine connection between the poet and the Almighty. The simplicity of the lines highlights the profound sense of love and gratitude towards the Lord, reflecting a deep spiritual insight. The repetition of phrases emphasizes the message of faith and divine perception, resonating with the readers who seek comfort and grace in the presence of their deity.

The comments from fellow poets and readers further echo the poem's impact, celebrating its spiritual resonance and minimalistic elegance. It is evident, that the poem has touched many hearts, inspiring them to reflect on their own relationship with the divine. The appreciation from readers across the globe underscores the universal appeal of this piece, bridging the gap between different cultures and beliefs through the shared language of love and spirituality.

In the words of Poeta Malume of Brazil, the poem embodies an "indisputable, sublime, and eternal truth," making it a testament to the enduring power of faith. As Dr. Zik engages with his audience, his gratitude and humility shine through, reinforcing the sense of community and shared devotion that his work inspires.

This poem is more than just words; it is a reminder of the Lord's boundless mercy and the completeness one feels in His presence. For those who read it, it serves as a beacon of hope and a celebration of divine love, encouraging us all to perceive the Lord's grace in our lives.

My Son

some laypersons deceive only
useless poetry prose.

I own him as my son who knows
rhyme in life he goes.

who loves sis and bro and parent,
and before Him, bows.

who is always caring for those
who live like a rose.

Dr Zik
Jhelum Pakistan
July 01, 2024

I'm delighted to share this rhyme composed in the Zikelite poetic form. The Zikorean Poetry movement includes various forms such as Ziket, Zinet, Zikelite, Zinelite, Zeelite, and Zekelet. Zikorean English Prose features branches like Zikology and Ziknetology. More about me can be found in my introductory video: [Video part 1 in my voice](https://archive.org/details/dr-zik-says-poems-zikorean-poetry).

Kevin has expressed his appreciation for my Zikorean poem "Invitation" and supports the Zikorean Movement, as seen here: [Kevin Puts Appreciation](https://web.archive.org/web/20240628011049/https://allpoetry.com/topic/show/269093616-Kevin-Puts-Appreciation-of-the-Zikorean-Poem-Invitation-and-Loves-the-Zikorean-Movement).

Congratulations to Kevin and all my fellow Zikoreans. My poem "I See You Smiling" has garnered over 312,625 views: [I See You Smiling](https://web.archive.org/web/20230809113548/https://www.poetry.com/poem/61389/i-see-you-smiling).

For a deeper dive into Zikorean English Literature, check out this research article: [Research Article](https://web.archive.org/web/20240623052950/https://allpoetry.com/topic/269074530-About-Me-at-a-Glance?c=1174602938).

Explore the metrical schemes of Ziket here: [Metrical Schemes](https://bit.ly/30hfc4X).

Discover more about the Zikorean movement and its forms:
- [Who is Zikorean?](https://bit.ly/3yaoexc)
- [Ziket Definition](https://web.archive.org/web/20240701125412/https://www.definitions.net/definition/ziket)
- [Zinet Definition](https://web.archive.org/web/20240626010138/https://www.definitions.net/definition/Zinet)
- [Zikelite Definition](https://web.archive.org/web/20240626012606/https://www.definitions.net/definition/Zikelite)

Thank you to all who have shown appreciation and support for my work: Violinstrings, John Faulkner, Patterson-Mooney, Owens Oracle, Ed Ostrom, SoulZest, David John Brompton, Barantoff, Mtownsend3, Pam Ray, Hosein Shafiei Bidgoli, Jon Nakapalau, Skypoet40, Philthepoet, Kaye, P K Roy, Margrie, Jason James, Gregmillhorn, Thomas W. Case, Tila, Edenbray, Kathryn A. Stewart, Pinky Promise, Cherr, Ryan Geoffrey Hayward, Xylen Aiel, Marcus Taylor, Gayathri.K.Moorthy, The Talentless Drinker, Pacman21145, Mike Horsfall, Mr. Flowers, Okey, and Antoli.

Your encouragement and feedback are invaluable, and I am grateful to share this journey with such a supportive community.

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