22/07/2025
Does your child need help with Descriptive writing?
Here's a sample of what they could achieve with the right guidance.
FLOATING AT SEA
"Today, the ocean was like glass.
I've been stranded on my little raft since the storm struck three days ago. Here am I, afloat in the middle of the South China Sea, with nothing but a discarded tin filled with rainwater and 2 proteins bars which had been stuffed in my pocket.
Hopeful, I leaned out to scan the water for something I could catch for my next meal. The shifting raft which I was floating on, agitated the water and sent radiating ripples across the crystal surface.
The sun was blinding overhead, and its scorching rays illuminated the depths, turning the water crystal clear.
Suddenly, 10 feet away from me, a triangular grey fin, about 4 feet in height, rose and sliced through the smooth surface. I gasped. Its streamlined body torpedoed through the depths, speeding towards me. My eyes widened as I saw its gaping mouth and distinctive head of a Great White became clear as it breached the surface. Mouth agape, its serrated teeth the size of razor blades grabbed hold of the rubber raft and whipped it from side to side; shaking me, like a rag toy, in it. I grabbed the sides with all my might to prevent myself from being tossed into the deep water and its awaiting teeth. Suddenly, it let go. "
Would you like your child to score A's for their English exams?
Better still - set them up early for SUCCESS by letting them acquire the right skills of written communication - a vital skills will help them soar in their future career?
Your child / teen will learn to captivate readers and examiners with
* Powerful vocabulary
* Captivating and variety of sentence structures to impress and engage examiners
* Writing techniques of different genres: Descriptive, Narrative, Persuasive writing, Information Reports, Articles, Speeches, E-mails, Formal and Informal writing
* Effective essay planning and organisation
* Learn to manage time efficiently to and create outstanding essays during exams.
* Acquire reading skills that will strengthen their Comprehension which will help them understand and retain their study materials better.
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